I just want some critique on how my intakes looks so far.
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Made in Onshape btw

You just might want to clarify a little bit. If you are putting this in your notebook, you should make sure that you accurately explain it. I can understand what you are trying to make, because I have seen similar designs before, but it may not be as clear as it could be
Ok, ill try to
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the first stage of intake looks pretty solid, but I would recommend adding something to pull the rings up instead of relying on friction from chain.
If there is only one screw here, then this will be a joint, not immobilized.
Same goes for the following. The chain might help stop this though.
You should also want a bar at the bottom connected the two sides to prevent rings from falling off, unless that is the perfect area for a ring or something similar.
Make sure this part doesn’t get into the way of rings:
I tried looking for flippers in Onshape but there was none, so I’ll eventually add em. Just not on the CAD
I’m also having trouble looking for them. I saw somewhere that someone had them, but I’m not quite sure how to get them.